Post by sharptooth on May 5, 2013 23:01:09 GMT -5
Basic
Name: Skeletalstripe
Gender: Male
Age: 21 moons
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Deputy (Warrior)
Basic Appearance: Black with white stripes and blue eyes.
Appearance: A cat strolls into the clearing his icy blue eyes glancing from side to
side. his muscular build flexed under his white head and stripes
shimmering in the moon light but the rest appeared to be jet black. his 3
inch claws dig into the ground as he snarled showing his yellow fangs.
when he stopped baring his fangs he stood at his full height his small
paws seemed so tiny compared to his 13 inch long legs. he pulled one up
and licked the black padded paw with his pink tongue and then pushed
his fur down on the top of his head. a cold wind ruffled his long fur
sending a ripple down the 34 inches from the base of his neck to his
long tail. he fluffed up his long tail letting it lay flat on the ground
matching the length of his legs. he turned his black triangular nose to
the sky and scented the air. the fur on the back of his 2 inch neck. he
smoothed out his fur back into it's sleek looking texture and lowered
his small ears down and bolted away.
Personality: Treachery is running in his blood as Skeletalstripe is a half-blood. For
this reason his fear is that his ancestors reject him for his mothers
deceit of the warrior code. He only hopes that he is wrong and that his
mother may even have joined Starclan. He is very shy when discussing
this topic. He likes to hang in the trees and swim even if his clanmates
laugh at him for it. He also loves the night for he is accustomed to it
because of his many nights training his tail. He hates when others make
fun of him but he is a good fighter and has made a way to rid himself
of his burden. He despises rogues, kittypets, and loners for they are
always reminders of his mothers deceit of the warrior code.
Skeletalstrike is very secretive and sneaky because he doesn't trust
easily because many make fun of his half-blood. He is very friendly but
often is very shy. Most felines think Skeletalstripe is a very weird
some what mysterious. Some think he is very shy and needs someone who he
can trust. The others see him as a freak who shouldn't even be a clan
cat. Even though he is afraid they will not accept him Skeletalstripe is
very good on the point of Starclan and does believes deeply in them. A
weird quirk of Skeletalstripe is he loves to be a playboy. His one
motivation in life is to prove himself to Starclan. Skeletalstripe
admires each clan's special skill and loves to do it himself.
Role Play Sample:
Skeletalstripe walked down the slope to the edge of the large stream. He needed time to think and didn't want to be near the clan so instead of hanging in the trees, he decided to practice some swimming. He put one small paw into the water testing how cold it was. It didn't feel to bad to him so he walked in until water was touching his stomach. Water why are you so comforting yet all accept Riverclan don't use you like I do? he thought. He relaxed and looked over his shoulder to check for any of his clan mates he spotted none and began to swim. He loved swimming he thought it useful to know in case of a fight between his clan and Riverclan. He sighed wishing he had clanmates who liked to swim like he does but sadly he did not which meant he had no company to talk to when he swam. He knew even if he did teach some cat to swim that the person wouldn't because of how his clanmates made fun of him for it. He saw a fish dart by and smiled. The stream was still full of life he thought. He wish he had been born in Riverclan to a different mother. He swam to the shore and sat watching the water go on down the stream.
Comments/Other:
Name: Skeletalstripe
Gender: Male
Age: 21 moons
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Deputy (Warrior)
Basic Appearance: Black with white stripes and blue eyes.
Appearance: A cat strolls into the clearing his icy blue eyes glancing from side to
side. his muscular build flexed under his white head and stripes
shimmering in the moon light but the rest appeared to be jet black. his 3
inch claws dig into the ground as he snarled showing his yellow fangs.
when he stopped baring his fangs he stood at his full height his small
paws seemed so tiny compared to his 13 inch long legs. he pulled one up
and licked the black padded paw with his pink tongue and then pushed
his fur down on the top of his head. a cold wind ruffled his long fur
sending a ripple down the 34 inches from the base of his neck to his
long tail. he fluffed up his long tail letting it lay flat on the ground
matching the length of his legs. he turned his black triangular nose to
the sky and scented the air. the fur on the back of his 2 inch neck. he
smoothed out his fur back into it's sleek looking texture and lowered
his small ears down and bolted away.
Personality: Treachery is running in his blood as Skeletalstripe is a half-blood. For
this reason his fear is that his ancestors reject him for his mothers
deceit of the warrior code. He only hopes that he is wrong and that his
mother may even have joined Starclan. He is very shy when discussing
this topic. He likes to hang in the trees and swim even if his clanmates
laugh at him for it. He also loves the night for he is accustomed to it
because of his many nights training his tail. He hates when others make
fun of him but he is a good fighter and has made a way to rid himself
of his burden. He despises rogues, kittypets, and loners for they are
always reminders of his mothers deceit of the warrior code.
Skeletalstrike is very secretive and sneaky because he doesn't trust
easily because many make fun of his half-blood. He is very friendly but
often is very shy. Most felines think Skeletalstripe is a very weird
some what mysterious. Some think he is very shy and needs someone who he
can trust. The others see him as a freak who shouldn't even be a clan
cat. Even though he is afraid they will not accept him Skeletalstripe is
very good on the point of Starclan and does believes deeply in them. A
weird quirk of Skeletalstripe is he loves to be a playboy. His one
motivation in life is to prove himself to Starclan. Skeletalstripe
admires each clan's special skill and loves to do it himself.
Role Play Sample:
Skeletalstripe, Thunderclan deputy
Skeletalstripe walked down the slope to the edge of the large stream. He needed time to think and didn't want to be near the clan so instead of hanging in the trees, he decided to practice some swimming. He put one small paw into the water testing how cold it was. It didn't feel to bad to him so he walked in until water was touching his stomach. Water why are you so comforting yet all accept Riverclan don't use you like I do? he thought. He relaxed and looked over his shoulder to check for any of his clan mates he spotted none and began to swim. He loved swimming he thought it useful to know in case of a fight between his clan and Riverclan. He sighed wishing he had clanmates who liked to swim like he does but sadly he did not which meant he had no company to talk to when he swam. He knew even if he did teach some cat to swim that the person wouldn't because of how his clanmates made fun of him for it. He saw a fish dart by and smiled. The stream was still full of life he thought. He wish he had been born in Riverclan to a different mother. He swam to the shore and sat watching the water go on down the stream.
Comments/Other:
Mine
Skeletalstripe, Deputy
quick description a long tailed tall cat who is very sneaky and silent with very odd stripes.
NAME – Skeletalstripe
GENDER – Male
AGE – 21 moons
CLAN – Mistclan
RANK – Deputy
COAT – The base color of Skeletalstripe's pelt is black like a jet. He has very odd white stripes the match his skeletal structure thus indicating his name. the only part that isn't striped is his jet black tail and solid white face. when he closes his eyes they are covered with black fur. there for making him appear to be a Skeleton when he is out at night.
EYES – An icy blue
APPEARANCE – A cat strolls into the clearing his icy blue eyes glancing from side to side. his muscular build flexed under his white head and stripes shimmering in the moon light but the rest appeared to be jet black. his 3 inch claws dig into the ground as he snarled showing his yellow fangs. when he stopped baring his fangs he stood at his full height his small paws seemed so tiny compared to his 13 inch long legs. he pulled one up and licked the black padded paw with his pink tongue and then pushed his fur down on the top of his head. a cold wind ruffled his long fur sending a ripple down the 34 inches from the base of his neck to his long tail. he fluffed up his long tail letting it lay flat on the ground matching the length of his legs. he turned his black triangular nose to the sky and scented the air. the fur on the back of his 2 inch neck. he smoothed out his fur back into it's sleek looking texture and lowered his small ears down and bolted away.
GREATEST STRENGTHS – his legs and tail are the same length and he has made his tail strong so he can use it like an extra paw that doesn't have claw. thanks to that skill he has made a fighting style all his own that only he has mastered.
unless it's a full moon he can usually stay out of sight at night.
TOUGHEST OBSTACLES – stands out in a group and is very shy around others.
deals with the anger toward his clanmates by training to be better at night.
PERSONALITY – Treachery is running in his blood as Skeletalstripe is a half-blood. For this reason his fear is that his ancestors reject him for his mothers deceit of the warrior code. He only hopes that he is wrong and that his mother may even have joined Starclan. He is very shy when discussing this topic. He likes to hang in the trees and swim even if his clanmates laugh at him for it. He also loves the night for he is accustomed to it because of his many nights training his tail. He hates when others make fun of him but he is a good fighter and has made a way to rid himself of his burden. He despises rogues, kittypets, and loners for they are always reminders of his mothers deceit of the warrior code. Skeletalstrike is very secretive and sneaky because he doesn't trust easily because many make fun of his half-blood. He is very friendly but often is very shy. Most felines think Skeletalstripe is a very weird some what mysterious. Some think he is very shy and needs someone who he can trust. The others see him as a freak who shouldn't even be a clan cat. Even though he is afraid they will not accept him Skeletalstripe is very good on the point of Starclan and does believes deeply in them. A weird quirk of Skeletalstripe is he loves to be a playboy. His one motivation in life is to prove himself to Starclan. Skeletalstripe admires each clan's special skill and loves to do it himself.
GREATEST INFLUENCE– none
MOTIVATION – to raise his clan to be the best it can
HISTORY – In an older time love took hold of cat is the center of battle. A group of rogues had entered clan territory and challenged the clans. During a heated battle a Thunderclan warrior tackled a rogue into a holly bush. There with the Thunderclan warrior standing over the rogue tom they linked eyes. A spark bloomed and they fell madly for each other and when the rogues ran high tail the clan cats took 2 prisoners. The rogue leader and the Skeletalstripe's father. Fang, his father, gave himself to the clan to save a friend named Claw but he also had a secret motive, to get closer to Goldenheart, Skeletalstripe's mother. They met in the dirt place and soon Goldenheart began to bare the rogue's kits and after moons she helped him escape with the rogue leader. She told his father to wait at the border where she would meet him. When she went to leave she went into birthing. The guard heard her yowling and ran to get the medicine cat, but when the medicine cat got there one kit was born with black fur and odd white stripes, but sadly the other was a still born and Goldenheart didn't survive giving birth and died during it but before she died she named her kit, Skeletalkit, because of his odd stripes.
Skeletalkit then was adopted by a loving queen named Stonepelt who raised her as her own, but when he became an apprentice he went to his first gathering and learned about his mothers be trail. From then on he was a silent and sneaky cat who never said a word unless he had too. Skeletalpaw was so silent people thought he was very shy and tried to get close but he stayed the same way. In a training session with his mentor Skeletalpaw was forced onto his hind legs and realized his tail could be used in battle if it were stronger. Soon he began sneaking into the territory just outside the camp. He began by wiping his tail at moss. then he began balling moss with it and pushing himself up and down when on his hind legs. then he began picking up his balled moss with his tail then twigs then actual branches. he then soon had his tail as strong as his legs. he was able to use his tail as a fifth paw even balance on it. The next time he went near a sandy area he began to put his tail to use. He learned to toss sand with his paw and used his other three and his tail to go around in circles. When he Finally became a warrior he began to talk more and more. He was still mocked by some of his clanmates but he was used to it and had mastered his battle style in sandy areas. Eventually he had an apprentice and during training her he learned how to swim and climb trees. He taught some of it to his apprentice but knowing how to do something the other clans can isn't very good to some clan cats. So he kept it a secret mostly but some cats caught him swimming or hanging in the trees. After the moons of teaching his apprentice he was done when his leader came to him and asked if he would be the deputy, and Skeletalstripe said yes.